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Subject: Re: Komputer Korner apology

Author: Jonas Cohonas

Date: 01:20:03 05/19/05

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>Dear KK,
>
>If you would write in paragraph form, with sentences grouped by relationship to
>a particular thought or point, your thoughts would be much easier to read &
>understand.
>
>Paragraphs can have a lead sentence (so the reader knows the next point that is
>to be discussed), and end with a conclusionary sentence when a point is
>illustrated or proven.  I'm no writing expert, but you know what I mean.
>
>Several paragraphs in a row, when related, can elucidate or cover a particular
>theme of the author--from introduction, to conclusion.
>
>By writing in a l-o-o-o-n-g single paragraph, it is easy to mix several points
>so thoroughly that the reader gets confused.  It is hard to tell when a totally
>new theme is being introduced, or when the text is hearkening back to a
>previously introduced theme that may or may not have been concluded.
>
>Did you always write in such a mono-paragraph style?
>
>Thanks for considering this writing style change,
>
>A reader,
>--Steve

I must admit, i haven't bothered to read his posts because of this single
paragraph "style", so needless to say i agree with you Steve.



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